That was and it brought a tear to my eye

this is well written. Lyrics match 2. Jeebus it's jus kawaii!;

Next to the final scene and Hein's suicide, this is probably the most popular scene in the movie. Actually, it's my FAVE next to Hein's suicide. I have my own fic in the works for this, but I'm not sayin' nuttin'til it's done. Can't have someone snatchin' my idea. :D

Hope you're going to write more. We need all the Neil/Jane fic we can get our grubby paws on!

I think it's nice. The lyrics fit quite well, I think, though I've never heard the song.. *will just have to listen to it someday*