you should make that into a short chapter story that was nice

The cutest Princess Tutu fanfic ever written. I adore it.

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I BLOODY LOVE YOU.

That's all I have to say. <3

XD That was so cute & funny. Nice job with this one.

Haha, that was so cute! I dont know who Fakir is trying to fool. Its OBVIOUS he TOTALY wantes her. ;D I adored this. =3

Aww! Hey, Ahiru really wanted to be close to him, didn't she. (Not really a question...) Good job, I really enjoyed it!

xD Ahiru! You scheming girl, you! *snickers of hiccup-y laughter*

My favorite parts (as if I could choose):

[New topic. New topic. That blonde sadist. Mr. Cat. Autor in a dress...Much better.]

Lilie IS a sadist! Ehehe, Autor in a dress...*evil giggle*

[“What the hx is so scary about sparks and sound waves and rain?!”]

xD ROFL, for lack of a better phrase.

[“Can I sleep with you?” “…What.” “Can I sleep with you?” “…You mean…sleep next to me.” “What’s the difference?”]

I cracked up there. Not only was it so IC for Ahiru, but I've also spent the last five- or ten-something years of my life trying to explain to my younger brother that he CANNOT call it "sleeping with me." So I felt Fakir's pain. xD

[“…Can I have a hug?”]

xD

["B-But you crossed the line!" "I didn't cross the line!" "W-Well your face did!"]

Hilarious. Fakir's reaction was priceless.

[Without a word, he took hold of her hand in his, fighting down the blush dusting across his cheeks.

They remained like that for the rest of the night, even as the storm died down. Fakir never saw the goofy, almost mischievous grin on Ahiru’s face under the quilt.]

*evil laughter* Scheming Ahiru! Ha, ha, ha...

Anyways, FAKIRU FOREVER! And I hope to see more of your work up soon.

~~*Holly*

This was really sweet.

Oh. My. God.
I think I just died from overdose of ADORABLE! Something about the whole 'comforting crush during thunderstorm because of fearful reaction to said thunderstorm' is just to cute to pass up.

please write a sequel

You had me giggling the whole time! I love stories that make me giggle!

Anyway.

Fakir was so completely Fakir! (does that make sense?) I've tried to write for these two before, and Fakir is ALWAYS OOC with me. Great job at keeping him in character!

You. Must. Update. i wanna know what happens!
great so far, so like Ahiru and Fakir, your keeping them in character and i can't wait to read more!

"Damnit, STOP. New topic. New topic. That blonde sadist. Mr. Cat. Autor in a dress.
...Much better."
XD
SO AMAZING!

thumbs up

This is simply AMAZING! You kept both Fakir and Ahiru is perfect character throughout the whole piece, and the idea of this story flows so, so well! I had no problem imagining the scene take place because it was just so realistic. ^_^

Kudos on a great job! I thoroughly enjoyed this. :D *FAVES*