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Shh-Its-Me
2009-11-11 . chapter 1
I'm positive that this isn't what you intended to do but for some reason, I found the whole fic incredibly hot 8D

I absolutely adore fics with reference to the civil war, especially when they have USUK in them. This is definitely one of my favourites ♥

I think the way you referred to the historical figures was really neat to. Washington as America's other father and Elizabeth as England's wife xDD

Over here, we use Yankee to refer to Americas as a whole but I honestly don't know anyone who does except for the occasion joke. It's more, oh those Americans *insert eyeroll*. No offense intended =P

Haha, in the end, I think it doesn't matter which spelling you use. I use British England myself, then again, Microsoft word claims that it's Australian English so there you go >D
Blue Seer
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
This was amazing, you should totally continue this.
Blank?
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
I have NO idea if I commented you on this, but...In the deep South, if you call someone a yankee, someone would be like, "...Dww>
LaRequinne
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
This is fabulously written; It was an pleasure to read. :D
chanchi76
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
Your story's...what's the word...(not cute...that's kind of strange...not disturbing either...uh...). Well, whatever that word is, it'll describe my likeness of your characters, especially the CSA.

By the way, QUESTION TIME! Who is the 'third' part of America (there's America, the CSA, and that 'pyromaniac' brother of the CSA that England mentione). You never went into detail about the third segment.
Ryukansen
2009-07-15 . chapter 1
...I love this story. I love the whole thing! Your writing style is amazing and your Southern America is awesome *_* Faves
Draven Urei
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Hey! I kinda have a story about Hetalia and the civil war! Only I have an OC named Black America ('cause let's face it...they are two TOTALLY different people)

Needless to say, I think I like this idea more. Great story! Though the country slang made me giggle at parts I wasn't supposed to giggle at, lol
iluvbooksandanime
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
I loved this! It was sad, but kinda cute-ish. lol it sadly took me forever to figure out that Confederacy US was the "visitor". For some reason I thought it was Ireland/Scotland and that was just confusing the crap outta me. To think, after the mention of the scar I knew it was about the Civil War, but I still got confused...*sigh*
Anomaly E
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
I love this~! I always wanted someone to picture Alfred as someone other than perpetually happy. I love those stories when the most cheerful people have something to hide. I really like your writing style, and I was wondering maybe if you could do something related to this.

I was thinking, what if England just cut all ties with America, and DIDN'T come see America during his huge mental breakdown in the Civil War. Then, the SOUTH wins. What would Alfred be like, then? Then, you could decide a time period when England wants to see what his former colony is doing, and BEHOLD: Souhern!America!

This is only a suggestion, but I'd be HONORED if you wrote something like this~!
daneandkiwi
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
Wow this was great! I was quite surprised when ´the Southern side came back and sure didn't see that coming. It didn't turn out as I thought it was when I read the sumary, but I was pleasantly surprised.

I like your writing style, it's very smooth and natural.
I'd like to add that the change of eye colour was a good idea as well.
You called Arthur an European, which I found interesting since most Europeans rather would think of themself as individual nationalities than Europeans. But I'm just thinking too much about details..xD

I learned some American history today as well so thank you!
(Uh, I lack some knowledge on the American civil..better get my head out of all the European history) I'd like for you to continue (but of course that's up to you)
Anyway to put a long story short: Your story was wonderful.
naria-satome
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
that was amazing story about the civil war. loved it!!
Sketch 'itch
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
Wow, I love how you used big historical facts and incorporated into the story because not much people don't do much research before writing a historical-based fanfiction.

I applaud to how you brought out America's split personality from the Civil War. Most of the time, I just see Alfred as this happy-go-lucky guy. But Alfred having a dark side.. Its quite surprising. XD

Anyways I loved reading your story! <3
Holly Lawliet
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
This is good! I love the heavy soutern accent! I'm a southerner at heart and man do I get in trouble for my vocabulary and grammar. I swear I'm gonna get grounded for sayin "I ain't got no." XD
greenpanic6
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
liked it a lot. I'm from the south and dont like being called a yankee so your right it is just not cool. i always seprate ya'll like y'all but maybe your right.
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