Damn this is one great story. I was hooked in with Ichigo goes hollow but then the whole angsting he went through EVERY chapter about being hollow, but having feelings and having to serve Aizen yada yada yada started to eat away the level of this story. Bah was hoping for a truly evil Ichigo but anyways still very good story. Made me to read to the latest chapter.

Biggest weakness so far is the redundance of certain phrases and saying the same thing couple of times back to back. Aizen admiring the fight, throws a comment about something and then it is again mentioned that he's admiring the fight. Small annoyance.

The final chapter's fights were very interesting. Hoping to see Ichigo and Yamamoto going all out (both of them still have tricks up their sleeves I believe). Big plus for not just making Ichigo go "..and Ichigo mustered the bestest Getsuga Tensho he could..." and five seconds later "...and Ichigo shot the bestesttestest Getsuga Tensho he could..." I think you see what I'm talking about. Variety is the spice of life.
Rukia's bankai form cliffy was evil. Must see it! Also woot for Renji hopefully dying. Nothing againts Renji, I just absolutely HATE how main characters can't NEVER EVER DIE. Kill him. KiLl HiM BUHUHUHAAAAA...plox?

I'm really enjoying your story here!

I really enjoy the idea of Ichigo being one of the espada, this is actually the first time I've read such a story. Usually I'm more interested in IchiHime stories, but considering the circumstances it's very understandable why it's IchiNel, as well as VERY enjoyable. I was a bit worried that the romance would move too quickly (like alot of other stories seem to do), but It's great that your keeping it at such a steady pace. There is ALOT of fighting going on right now, which is understandable, but the fights really do jump around way too much.

Nonetheless, this story has been an amazing read so far, and I can't wait to see what else happens.

Please update soon.

Great story! I love the plot! Ugh, I hate Hinamori and how Toshiro has angermanagment issues and is dedicated to Hinamori! Agh, they're so blind! Never mind that, I'm going to take a break from this awesome story and read the next 7 chapters soon. Until then, update when possible!

woa, bankai... sad though the story ends here... UPDATE! haha

thank you for your time... awesoem really.. curious about hinamori and well about cirucci...

hey, hmm... cirucci is trapped in the pillar as well? just confused about your motives haha...

awesome fights... everyone is equal in terms of power and whatver... very realistic

harribel's intro seems a bit rushed...
hurray for rukia being a captain... :D

so hinamori-chan is a vozored now... coool!
sighs awesoem fight scenes. i find Yumichika bad ass here too despite not fighting... :D

1. What do you think of character deaths? This could mean absolutely any character. Shinigami Captains, Espada, Ichigo's old friends or family, Rukia, even Ichigo or Nel themselves.

DONT MIND REALLY BUT PLEASE MAKE HINAMORI NOT WEAK OR SOMETHING...

2. What do you think of the story so far? What did you like? What didn't you like? What do you feel I should work on as a writer. Is there anything in the storyline so far that you feel needs to be worked at? tHE STORY WAS GENERALLY AWESOME... GODLIEK EVEN... DESPITE THE ROMANCE BUT I KNOW ROMANCE ISNT A BIG THING IN THIS STORY SO ITS GOOD. I THINK YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER, SERIOUSLY...

3. What are your thoughts on side pairings? So far I don't have any intention to introduce any. Though perhaps I could be swayed in doing so should the demand be high enough and should I be willing to.

NO THOUGHTS ACTUALLY... AS LONG AS IT DOESNT MAKE A BIG DEAL IN THE PLOT

4. How would YOU like to see the story end? I personally have already thought of an ending that I believe is both fitting and original but nonetheless I would like to hear your thoughts on it.

GO WITH WHAT YOU GOT
5. And lastly, similar to the previous question. Is there any particular way one would like to see the story progress from here? Once again I have already planned this out and while I can no longer be swayed into making the story turn into a certain direction it does interest me to know what you readers would like to see.

HMM, IS HINAMORI BECOME A VIZARD OR SOMETHING? JUST AS SIDE QUESTION. SIGHS KINDA LIKES AIZEN. WHY DOES LAS NOCHES HAVE TO END
AWESOME CHAPTER... xd

i seriously just said "Ohmygodwowfuckingawesome" when I heard the word Momo Hinamori! please make her badass or soemthing... hoping though i REALLY liked her... or somehting. awesoem chapter.. yes Luppi is Madness XD

his recu is awesome! haha... wooH! oh aND like Ggio too! hceers for being Ichi's fraccion. XD

like the chapter. please, i accept some cheesy romance but no HAREM please... hehe...

sighs i guess this will become romance huh...
ill still read though...

hi, umm i want to point out a small mistake...

during the introductions, ulquiorra is the octava espada/ and syazel is the quinto espada. you maighth ave them switched...
nice chapter... sighs, hope harribel shows up.

I guess you changed the histories of Stark and Lilinette. but its okay, its still believable. wonder where Harribel is

I felt relieved that there are no pairings here. thank you... its so hard to look for a fanfic this days that dont have pairings... :D back toreading...
oh and you are AWESOME