aww, it's not THAT bad. a bit fluffy, but otherwise all right. i like the last sentence.

this review doesn't match the mood of this, but...

Thalia, talking like this in French, makes a funny image.

i like this, though. ^^;

This...this piece amazes me. In fact, it's likely one of the finest AUs I've ever read.

I love all the allusions to French culture, the imagery and frequent simile use, the close attention to scents and sounds--they all make the story captivating, make it seem so much more real and beautiful.

Not to mention that the characterization was gripping.

Your perceptions of Luke and Thalia are beautiful--amazing really, and I can say with confidence that your writing's of a higher caliber than a lot of the published words I've been reading lately. Luke’s loneliness, Thalia’s anger, their love--it all felt remarkably tangible and human.

There were a few slips in tense, I'll admit, a slide from past to present, which made the writing a little odd and convoluted, so you might want to give it another read to correct that. But otherwise, I found the entire piece to be a breath of fresh air, a true gem.

(What you call lame, you see, I call art.)

Bravo, bravo, bravo.

~Koky

No! You mustn't die! *begs*

'Their hymne d’espoir, their anthem of hope, burned bright for all to see.'

It was beautiful, honest to God. The style was different, yes, but it was poetic - everything flowed together so very perfectly - and I loved it to bits. *grins*

You is the best. Hope you're feeling better?

... no. Not cheesy - not at all. Sweet, rather. Sweet, and loving and beautifully, breathtakingly written. - and, as usual, I do not have words fit to describe the sheer Brilliance of your writing. You Mozart of writers! *smiles*

*sighs* It's ... lovely. Tres,tres magnifique.

this was quite good - not your usual style, but still wonderful in its own right. i liked especially luke's observation about the billions of people in the world, and the way the emotion worked was beautiful.
your vision of the "luke-and-thalia" thing, how they live together and use each other's stuff, was just perfect too, because that's what that sort of a relationship would be like, it seems.
thanks!
update it takes two? XD

wow this story was beautiful and i loved the ending! it is not lame not matter how many times you say it is (and trust me, i know what lame is...my name, claudia, actually means lame lol)...it was another great and poetic story...you never cease to amaze us :]

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL.

I loved it.

Thalia French is a little hard to picture but I mean, HEY, if it works for the story...

Anyway, I loved it. It was adorable.

Aw! I couldn't help but smile at this one. Whether it's cheesy or not, it's still a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it and you've now made me a Thuke fan. Haha.

So wonderful and beautiful! Really, I don't get how you think this is lame, its breathtaking, detail wonderful, romance wonderful, story wonderful, plot wonderful, everything wonderful! Really, this is one of the best stories I've ever read! And you finished it! (I love when people do that) I really love this story and I hope you write more Thalia/Luke soon! (Really, if you write anything I'll read it, Thalia/Luke is just my favorite pairing. Hmm, I think I might have said that before... Oh well)


Thank you so much for writing this story, its certainly gorgeous, splendid, beautiful, and everything else good. I really look forward to reading more of your work.








Thalia Castellan.

Don't you DARE die on me! You have a happy review reply to give this, because you know you want to. Now is not the time for cheese, it is the time for compliments! Well... actually I summed it up in all my others, so this is just to wrap it up. Eh... you can have your cheese now. :P

Have you ever won the Pulitzer? I'd nominate you :3. This is, again, fantastic. Ending was expected, but still good.

*sob*

so good...*hiccup*

Holy **! How do you write so well?! Wait, don't answer that? Its instinct, huh?

Ah well.

Very nicely done, as always, and again, as always, I am insanely jealous. Rawr.

But I'm sorry you're not feeling well!

BUT! Courtesy of Bio AP, I do know where the pain-relief points are! Thanks BIO!

Anyways, if you lay your hand flat, in the junction of your thumb and first finger, there is a squishy bit of muscle. Press onto that and massage it, and although I don't know a time limit that you should do it for, it works. It cuts down on the ache.

But I'm sorry that you aren't feeling well! D=

~Bami

This was an amazing story! I absolutely loved it; the characters and description were all perfect. You're a terrific writer!