great story:)
but grammatical errors;

This is a very cute story! Poor Sun and Nagasumi can never get a break. It was very sweet of Sun to sing a song to wake Nagasumi from his sleep. :'-)

If you plan to, I hope you continue this.

Thx...I love Akeno and Naga fics.

it's soooo... ROMANTIC!:D

I'm glad you made your first fanfic about Seto, It has next to no stories on here at all, which is a shame as it's an exceptional anime with tons of potential due to mermaid products (which is what you've done). You have kept the characters the way they should be, they don't act OOC in the slightest. The story is imaginative and I really enjoyed it. Well done :)