|Reviews for When|
| TheEvilAshleyness 6/24/10 . chapter 2
The words were beautiful, the language flowing together very well. I'm not sure I got the point necessarily but the flow of it was attractive.
| TheEvilAshleyness 10/8/09 . chapter 1
| Wet-Toilet-Roll 8/29/09 . chapter 1
すごい！Short and super sweet.
| silverymare 7/23/09 . chapter 1
love it. It reminded me of an fic idea I had - asdkhghasdas, but I can't wait to see what the rest of the chapters are like! :D
| disfigured-dream 7/14/09 . chapter 1
Cute! But a little short for a chapter. Ending was appropriate. )) I'm keeping an eye on this one.