The words were beautiful, the language flowing together very well. I'm not sure I got the point necessarily but the flow of it was attractive.

Update? Please?

すごい！Short and super sweet.

love it. It reminded me of an fic idea I had - asdkhghasdas, but I can't wait to see what the rest of the chapters are like! :D

Cute! But a little short for a chapter. Ending was appropriate. )) I'm keeping an eye on this one.