Poorly written, OOC, and ridiculously violent. I'll bet your grandkds just loved this one!

Thank god The Weasleys finally got what they deserved, even if in non-cannon. I personally think the last three and a half books would have been much better if JK had handed the writing over to you.

Sure then.

Vaults are transfered. All familial properties striped and sold muggle for the higher prices they can fetch on the open market. The family plot given over to the township as a community graveyard.

Black and Potter libraries transported to Australia wher they are kept in a complex dug into the side of a mountain by the goblins. The new family home sitting across the entrance and using a tenth part of the profits from the sales back home a solidly built Italian villa covers the entrance to the complex. Rumors eventually leek out about the information sources the Potters in Australia have (said to equal many collections in Ministirial hands). Being admited into the treasure trove of magical knowledge is sought after.

Letting the Weasleys and the purebloods continue to enslave the muggleborn means the end of magical England. The crown knows to much and a return to business as usual will not be tolerated. I can see a military intervention taking Hogwarts away from McGonagall (if she doesn't open the doors for them) in a very short time.

As should havehappened the first day of the seventh year when the Death Eaters took the Ministry.

You showed this to children? What is wrong with you? Are you some sort of pervert? Who would show such misogynistic drivel to their own grandchildren? Do you not want them to respect you?

Get help.

And maybe try reading the books while you're in therapy.

I love it :)

An interesting, if unusual, premise. While I can easily see Molly and especially Ron using the muggle enslavement magicks on Hermione, Arthur has always struck me as the most honorable man in the series...harry included.

Given that Harry saw Hermione kiss Ron, regardless the reason, I'm surprised he faced the snaky dude at all. His infatuation with Ginny was over, (until the crapilogue) and so, Hermione was the women closest to him for all of his teen years. To see her kissing someone else would have been devastating.

The Vicar is between a rock and a hard place. he understands the problem, but even with the fall of Voldemort, the purebloods still hold all the power. (Hell of a lesson for children, ain't it?)

While I disagree with your assessment on Ginny, (She's quite intelligent, if a /lot/ spoiled, but Ron...that was right on track. the boy's 'bout as dumb as a football bat.

If the Weasleys senior, were that well versed in such magicks, they should have immediately understood that their enchantments had been shattered.

The wizarding world is fickle as hell, but I highly doubt they would sent a pureblood family to Azkaban over the complaints of a mudblood and a half-blood...even Harry Potter.

The deaths of the Weasleys were particularly nasty. Fitting, perhaps, but nasty nevertheless.

Charlie was stupid. Not something one wants to be when one deals with fifty foot long flying predators.

Bill, appears to be the only survivor. Shame really.

I fully agree with your assessment of Hogwarts. Even in canon, nothing changed. Draco was still spewing his bile, his parents got off because they weren't 'directly involved' with the final battle, (Read: Bribed someone) and the house system still fostered those hatreds. Helluvaway to run a school, neh?

Australia is a much better choice.

Thank you for a wonderful read.

Alorkin

Good story, but what happened to Percy

well again not disappointed. I must say that when you have Harry angry he is angry. Thank you for always writing wonderful stories.

Interesting.
I like the "The Weasleys have imprisoned me!" twist.
Very coolio.

That was quite an ending. I enjoyed the story a lot.
Although there are many unpleasing actions that Harry and Hermione did to get revenge on the Weasleys.
Personally i think that getting revenge would be getting out of hand and that a truce would have been more effective with the audience without killing the family members.
I do like the story plot and the way it ended. it was nice.
And your Writing skills are good as well. which made it better.
Great Writing and Keep up the good work.
Yours Sincerely,
~YellowSakura

Brilliant Story! Bravo!

Not bad, glad see some the unusal Weasley's actualy die for a change. No saving arthur 'because he didn't know' or the Twins for pretty much same reason.

I will say I always have a bit of a thought about fics like this though, the whole forced marriage law favoring purebloods. It seems.. off that purebloods would want muggleborn wives and have laws made up for it. Would it not ruin their blood status to do so? If Purebloods had laws for muggleborn wives at all I would think it be something like manditory sterlization so they can be sex toys and maids, but not pollute the bloodline.

I'm always happy to read your stories. Often i wish they were a little more fleshed out.


I liked this story, but I think you have written better ones. Ah well, not even Mozart wrote masterpieces all the time ...

I have no problem with the idea of evil Weaslies. Your story is not a purebloodspuremacy issue but rather getting some fresh blood into the family. After all, if they were pureblood racists, why marry a muggleborn ?

My biggest problem is the violence - i totally cringe at the idea of amputated genitals. It's cruel and unusual punishment :p
No guy should be subjected to that :) (although i can imagine some family of mine deserving such a fate :p - now that i come to think of it, i take back my last paragraf !! )

Very interesting!

The story could have been a decent multi-chaptered fic but does pretty well as a one-shot too.