Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Foreign
Kibble Beast
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
the g1 part was LOL.
can starscream do anything right?

i loved your movie-verse part.
like a lesson in body language :)
the way you made them act and the body language is realistic and easy to imagine. :D

megatron seems very familiar with seekers... :P
aww... i feel sorry for optimus.
just cause he can't fly, doesn't mean he is inferior.
well done you! xD
Moonscream
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
You really should correct F-12 to F-15 before you get 500 reviews correcting that. ;)
Eliza Acheron
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
That was great! I really liked how you described the social interactions of the seekers and just the whole idea of it. :) Nice job!
Return to Top