For the love of all that is good in this world, please, PLEASE CONTINUE!

I know it's been a while since your last update but you can't possibly leave us hanging like this, it's criminal!

Proper amusing how Ryan abhors the American accent... Nothing quite like the good old English one if I say so myself (full of pride)...

And so the 12 are gathered...

And the beginning of the end has begun... Dammit, he's such a tragic character really isn't he!

Nooooo!" I screamed, pounding on the glass. Break! Break! Dear fucking Christ in Heaven why doesn't it break? "Nooo!"

Seriously! Line of the Day!

Everything you've written is so bloody perfect for him, he's so damned twisted.

In all honesty, never before have I felt so completely immersed in the ravings of a madman's mind. This moves at lightening speed amazingly!

Bugger me! That was intense!

This is quite possibly my favorite story in this section. I love the way you write Ryan, its perfect! It's psychotic and wonderful and twisted and amazing! Please, keep writing, I am a HUGE fan. You really are a breath of fresh air in this fandom.

I find this to be really, shockingly, good. Really good. I love it! Update soon please!

hey really good story and i just realized you used some of the dialoge from introductions. please continue ;P

Just a few other reviews? Are you kidding me? This story puts my own to shame, I'm gonna have to start rethinking the way I portray Ryan now. I love how his psychosis is so obvious here, but with his own reasons, he makes it seem like its a good cause. You. Are. Amazing. And even though theres a female that Ry toys with in my story, I would so enjoy for this one to stay the way it is, no love interests for sweet psychotic Ryan. Makes him seem more and more unstable, I like. And if anyone gives you mouth about that, I shall be your personal guard! -salutes- I love how the other ghosts are annoyed with him, and I especially loved it when he was speaking to The Bound Woman, and I hope they have more talks like that in the future.

Amazing story, and I cannot wait till you post up more!

OMG i love this story. Ryan is acting the way he should act, not like some idiot that kills with out reason. Please continue with your story. :D

this is a really good story and although i love to have an love interest i agree with electric smile don't break under the pressure you will survive ;P

If you buckle under the pressure of the hordes of fangirls begging you to give the jackal a love interest so help me god I'll eat your children. Write more so I know whether or not to be disappointed in you yet.