That was one of the most moving and poignant things I have ever read.

Oh, that was something right there now... Me like.:)

Lovely, you have just proven, that when one is gifted, the lenght of the story does nto affect the impact on the reader.

Great story! OK I get that it's Legolas (?) but I can't figure out who the girl is, or where or when it takes place... But then I usually have to be hit over the head with the plot before I get it... I enjoyed reading it very much though! :)

Such nice imagery! Most of the Legolas stories I read are about a much younger version of him. A really neat perspective!

That was a very moving story. Really different, too. Portraying Legolas as an old man is really subtle, too. I guess the sea-longing and his grief would make him feel old, and he appears as such to the girl (just in terms that she could understand)...wow. This is really good. And you're certainly not a bad writer, if this is the kind of work you do. Remember that people can see different interpretations in a single story, and this is one that can be taken many ways. Nice job.

Ivy of the Nightrunners

that was beautiful!I really felt like crying.

My ,my you're a great writer.

Oh dear I guess I just can't stop myself*small tears run down her checks*Please do carry on writing stories.You've got a talent*wipes the tears off*

That was... beautiful.

And I think I understand, for I too carry saddness in my heart.

Short, sweet and absoloutly beautiful.

very sad. but i like sad. lots.

cool fic.

'An elf listening to the calling of the sea' poignant and sad yet somehow uplifting.

Aww...that was absoloutley sweet! Breathtaking and elegant in every way. This story will deffinitly keep me up nights just thinking about it. Hopefully, I'll hear more from you. I like the story you're telling here... MORE!

I think...that was about the sweetest fan fic I have ever read...sincerly hoping that you write more!

OMG It was Legolas! Galadriel said that if he heard the cry of a seagull his heart would no longer remain with the sea! I can't beleive i remember that...*looks at self in wonder*

Legolas! Poor baby, torn between two worlds. I feel so sorry for him! Wonderful work. ^o^