Very cool. Loved it. Wasn't hot for the end with Lizzie, seemed a bit much, but I loved:

She hates her. And him. She hates them both so fucking much that all she wants is for them to drown in their masquerade.

It was perfect. Can't wait for more!

That was amazingly awesome, I love it. really.

Nice! I like it!

whoa O_O i love the ending, that was so unpredictable O_O

Nice story and nice work!!

Oh...wow. *Definitely* didn't expect it to be Lizzie! She seems a little bitter, I bet it's because of the whole Truman/Casey and Derek/Emily thing, they're just ruining their lives because they're too proud/cowardly to admit just exactly what they want.
I love dark one-shots like this one and though it wasn't graphic, it was definitely intense! And I really loved how you focused on the fact that they WANT each other (which, they so totally do. I mean, you just have to look at the way Derek looks at Casey to know that) and not an extended version of love or something, because all said and done, they are only 17 or something. And how everything is just a game but it ends up hurting all the players.
I'm glad you're writing more than CR, but don't leave the fandom entirely! It needs more Shaitlyn love! (Although I love this LWD/CR merger with Bonnie, howlsatthemoon and now you writing too :)

Whoa. I so was not picturing Lizzie as the narrator. 0_0 That was certainly a twist. And yet, it makes sense. You usually reserve a special kind of anger for your family. As much as you love them, they can also get under your skin like no one else--partly because you see each other every day and the frustrating habits gnaw at you after a while.

I think it's okay to not write for a fandom for a while, if you're not into it anymore. The inspiration may come back later, you know? I still love H2O, but taking a break from it for a while to write for other things. And it's been... inspiring. So go for it, Pyro, if you feel you need to. I was just thinking about the story I promised you today. I need to get on that. My thoughts have been dominated by this other pice, but it's almost done. :) I think I might relax tonight and watch Princess Protection Program. I never did get to see the whole thing. Then I should drop you line because I remember you talking about a potential pairing. I should warn you though that I always 'ship strange ones. ;) I think I'm leaning towards Carter/Bull (is that his name? the guy who pushed the yougurt button?)

Somehow that last paragraph took a strange turn in terms of content. A truly all-over-the-place ramble. Sorry.

Theres always only one typo, but I found two. She hate that Add an s. And this sounds better as themselves: honest with their selves. At least, I think so.

Great story as always, Ada-la, now get to work on SWAC. Please?

so angsty love it. and weirdly enough i can see lizzie having a thing for derek...

Pyro, this was your first LwD?
It was great you have a great grasp on UST, and I have read A LOT of LwD fics.
Angsty and just full of sexual tension, and just really spot on with the show.
I like that it was Lizzie. The Lizzie/Derek/Casey triangle is always refreshing. I had a feeling that is was either Lizzie or Emily.
And I'm rambling, sorry.
I really liked this. I would like to see you write more LwD.

~C.C.Slam

oh my gosh !
i don't think i've read a LWD story like this before . i love & hate how it is from Lizzie's POV . i never saw that coming .
but i totally love the concept of this story, pyro . :)

anndd , the writing doesn't suck so much either . ;)

Pyro!

This was brilliance. Pure, freaking, ansty brilliance. I never expected it to be told by Lizzie, but it worked in that way. I like the whole Lizzie/Derek/Casey love thing going on. (;

But that was so well written and true. And this paragraph just killed me: "That's just a load of bullshit. She knows exactly what she's doing. Wearing those cute little skirts. Those tight-fitting tops. She wants him to look. She wants him to want her. She needs him to want her. She needs to know that she's in control. Because she needs to be in control. Because it's the only thing Casey MacDonald has ever been good at." Because it was so true.

*Claps* Wonderful. Keep writin', loves. (:

Heyy! =]
Interesting one-shot. Lizzie is obviously very bitter in it, judging from the amount of 'fucks' littered throughout the fic. No complaints though, I don't mind that, it adds to the frustration and bitterness that is Lizzie here.
I was confused as to who it was at the start -- and that's what probed me to read it in the first place. I had thought it was Emily, but nice twist with Lizzie.
Although if it's wrong between Casey and Derek, it's the same for Lizzie.
Anyhoo, I thought it was well-written and a good read. The masquerade thing was a brilliant way to describe their relationship, and the last line was very good. Perfect for the summary, too.
I strongly encourage you to write more LWD fics! There's honestly not all that much these days, since the show's season ended. I'd be interested in reading another LWD from you! I would write my own, but I've enough WIP fics as it is.
Anyway, the describing was brilliant, too. It was just a very good short piece.

Nice one-shot,
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