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Red Hope
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
4Kennedy!

Very awesome job and better still after a second read. :) I like the concept you crafted on Sarah and Cameron having to go on an undercover mission as girlfriends. It's a mixture of both original i.e. girlfriend cover but still familiar i.e. the mission. And I wonder if John didn't do that intentionally...?

I really got a kick out of when Sarah and Cameron are headed up to the office, and Sarah comments that she wishes she had a gun. But naturally Cameron reminds her that "You don't need one, you have me." That's just so great and made me smirk.

It's a great story! I could always do for a sequel (especially since Sarah promised it wasn't over), but I'm always a sequel obsessed kinda gal. :) Thank you for the fabulous read!
minako366
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
wish there was more
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