Oooh! Very dark, but I really enjoyed just how much story you were able to convey in what was actually quite a short one-shot. Great job!)

oh i did enjoy this one because of the child for Sookie. Quinn was a favorite of mine before he turned on her so that is how i am remebering him in your story. I am happy she was able to have a child but i am saddened by the fact that she lost him so early and to a human pervert. (i detest child abuse in any way and i am a survior myself so it touched my heart that you were quick and not graphic about the outcome of her child) I was happy that she turned to Eric for help, they always loved one another and this is proof, but is the bond still there after the turning? I hope it is they will have a strong maker/child relationship. so i am of course movingo nto the next segment to see what happens with Vamp Sookie. thanks kristie

Sad but revenge can be so sweet!

Aw that's so sad. If she really love Eric she should have been with him reguardless of the baby.

I felt really sad knowing that Sookie finally had her own family but lost them tragically. I admire Eric's patience and love for Sookie.
Your one shot stories are so ENTICING that make readers beg for MORE. I'm very glad that this is not the end of the story. I can't wait to read them all...so INSPIRING! Thank you!

Wow, totally different to what I have read, this Sookie is totally more mature and dark. After all what she had suffered, a lost of a child is deep. Excellent one-shot!

Wow. Completely different foundation for a storyline. I'm really enjoying it so far! I love this ending"I watch her stir. Her eyes open. She sees me and smiles. Yes, this is best. This is right. We’re together at last."

Great story. Love your writing.

Thanks!

awh... very sweet... You should continue this shout out! A series you haven't done yet... Sook as a Vamp... I've been on vacation and I plan on catching up on your latest series... No worries I did not stray!

Melissa

Loved it, and perfect use of the pigeon statement, super!

Great one shot! Such a sad story but revenge can be sweet!

Oh man...tear filled eyes -such a tale, and hopefully love will prevail over bitterness and loss...

Pat

Poor Sookie! What a great story. Really inventive and completely believable as to why she would want to be turned. These stories are so much darker than your AH stories. you show great breadth as an author.

Now that's a reason I can imagine she'd ask to be turned for...

Nice one-shot!

Girl, you are knocking these challenges out of the park! Sad story, but you wrote it beautifully!