...Some how I knew it was Darkcloud.

Rape scene was gross, but ...urm, detailed. Poor Blaster...

T.T i cry with yu Artemis

Is cuteArtemis

I think a bit with Soundwave and Slivercloud will be good, it's show how Sliverlunar got mad at Soundwave.

The story is good but it's sort of all over the place, you're sort of jumping a lot. I think you need to re-read this story and get it back on track.

Here's some ideas, like what's happening with Blaster's rapist?

What's it like for Blaster being pregant again.

What's happening with the war?

Hope this helps and I think you'll get your muse back if you read over what you've got.

i hope that you are continuing this fic. i love it!

awesome story please update soon

A very nice story that I am really looking forward to an update on. I like your take on the whole chest fedding and all the other little goodies with Blaster being a 'mommy.'(0: And poor Soundwave! Although, I can't help but to wonder who the sire of Eject, Rewind and the other two are? Anyway, wonderful story, can't wait for more.

I know who it is! I know who it is! I know who it is! Is it DarkCloud? Lemme know if I am right, btw. I am liking this story so far and I am really wanting to know what happens with Sounders and his lil creations. Poor guy! Poor cessettecons! I went ahead and voted and I want Blaster to maybe form a Trine like the Seekers do with Prowl and Jazz. They can all 3 be bonded, maybe. I dunno, just an idea and I hope you like it and can use it. Keep up the good work, girlie! Update soon-I am NEEDED an UPDATE ON MAH SOUNDERS, PAHLEESE!*puppy dog eyes* Thanks and bye for now!

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Hey, I love thisd story! I wanna see more, it is really REALLY well written! Great job!

You're very welcome btw :) Still pondering on who this new sparkling's going to be. Canon not canon? Eh, I'll wait and see. Lastly, poor Spike.

-PR

i am loving this. you did the rape scene really well, but wish it was a tad bit longer to tell why he was doing it when he said he waited so long.

poor Blaster certainly has taken some crap, but at least he's got the two best mechs to look out for him. update soon!

I...kinda like this:) Like you said, seeing the two as brother's isn't a common thing. imo anyway. I look forward to see how you continue this further.

-PR