Sorry about the harhness its just I try to be a perfectioness when it comes to things like this. Your story truly was lovely cand captured Bell very well. Brava to you, very well wriien. Also I'd like it if you could send my other review to anyone else who mixes up Bell and Bullet. Thank you and keep writing,

3B-JOJO

FOR THE LOVE OF BOB ALL YOU 'BELL' WRITERS ARE WRONG! 'BELL' IS A PPG 'NULLET' IS A SQUIRREL! THAT IS WHY THE CHARACTER LIST SAYS 'BULLET S.' PLEASE DO NOT EVER MIX THEM UP AGAIN! THEY ARE TWO DIFFERENT CHARACTERS ON THE SHOW! SERIUOSLLY ITS NOT THAT HARD! I'M SORRY FOR BEING SO HARSH IT JUST IF YOUR GONNA WRIGHT THE FICS ATLEAST GET THE CHARACTERS RIGHT!

I'm surprised it took me so long to find this, but regardless I enjoyed it. I've never been too fond of Mandark, but I was able to sympathize with him in this story. I think you captured his and Bell's characters perfectly. Well done.

Chex

that wasn't half bad actually in fact i think it fit perfectly i mean it's good the characters,feelings,relationship and even the ending which could happen but it still sad but it's a nice filler. wow you just wow i'm really surprised as how this is. that could be possible for bell is antisocial and susan is a cute name so that's why she could had open up. too bad it's over but nice though really nice.