I love it! But the issue is that I've loved it for a while. I've read all 6 chapters forever ago and you haven't updated... :c did u give up? Please don't. It's a great story and I'd hate not to know how it end.

Hah. Okay, I got through all of it. It's very nice, very twisted and violent as well.
I came into this story thinking you would be focusing more on the Wonderland aspect. The most interesting part of the story are the parts in Wonderland! Fit in more of that, possibly, please? :D You seem to have an idea now so yay!

One of my biggest problems in the beginning was the inclusion of Ibuki and Yuri (Lol boy love games). I have never even heard of Artificial Mermaid so their appearance was a surprise to me, but they fit into the story that you've set up Momo. What's even better is that they share the stage with the other characters perfectly.

Otherwise, your OC's fit in as well. I do have a problem with Sora, though nothing personal or story crippling. Maybe once he's developed a little more I'll like him a little more but it's a little too early. Me likes Hanako though cute.

Poor Yayoi. Things aren't going to end well for her I thinks.
The serial killer... Creepy-eepy. T-T I wanna see what his beef is soon enough.
That's about all I can say for right now. _ Keep on writing! I'd love to read more!

BWAHAHAHA! I had a perfect image of Atsuki in my head. Write more! I wanna find out what happends with Ibuki and Yuri!

GRAH *outburst done with, suffers in silence
...oh well... *sighs* it seems like it'll be all right, since the main focus is on Yayoi.

yeah. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the Twisted Wonderland comes out!

Oh wow! This is a really interesting plot and makes me want to read more. Please update soon!

Wow, don't know exactly what to say... It is good though, and I will read future chapters.

Could this be counted as a Lux-Pain version of American McGee's Alice? Or just a twisted version of Alice in Wonderland?