This story is fantastic and really interesting. I really hope you decide to keep it going. Michelle's premonition adds a level of interest to her character that she definitely doesn't have on the show, and it's nice to see her elevated a little since she obviously has a critical role to play. Please keep writing this!

Good Story

I love this story I can't wait to read more!

That's not fair. Leaving it there for us to speculate, to stare, and to gaze open-mouthed at.

In other words, update soon.

Your insight into the thoughts and musings of Michelle are well-written and well-placed. (Had to add my actual opinion, despite that fact that it isn't well-places wihin the review).

AirDragon717

Thank you. For writing a good David/Michelle fic, I've been craving one. I have writers' block myself.

AirDragon717