Another great story. I love the story that was written, the histroy between Starscream, Skyfire and Megatron. It seems like everyhting that happens happens in order. Also, Ive noticed that you write some very detailed stories. I like that about a writer; the accuracy of hte plot and the attention to details. I think thats one thing that makes your stories so iressitable. ( I probably just spelled that word wrong, sorry)

All I can say is aw how sweet! Makes the other story a bit more interesting as well sense Megatron is now linked to Starscream making him imortal. I am really curious to see on how the rest of that story will pan out.

Wonderful story. (-:

Teoryn

Oh wow now we know who Eclipse other creator is. I like how you had them talk out the problems and didn't bound write away. I also like how Sky is acting as such a good Co-creator to Eclipse , he hasn't sparked her but he treats her as his own which is a plus. I also like how you have Star , not holding the sparkling at fault for her creation and loving her .

You continue to write such beautiful stories looking foward to more.

Oh, this is just wonderful! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! And you gave us 3 chapters all at once *joygasm!*.

I love the way you write. It's so intricate and detailed but not over-burdened or strained. It shows instead of telling. And the elements that you make such great use of, the flow, the interactions, are just delicious, and I look forward with much eager glee to see what happens next!

And the fact that it's got Starscream as a main character, with Skyfire/Starscream and a sparkling, well, let's just say you have made me very happy indeed. Oh yes.

Two things to note though. One, you probably shouldn't be using so many -it's-. That form is a short-hand of -it is-, and doesn't fit 99% of the time you used it.

Two, try to break your writing up a bit more. In regards to most other writers, you do very well in this respect, but smaller paragraphs would work better I feel. When I like a story enough, I'll save it to my harddrive to read at my leisure, and the one thing I always have to do is break up the paragrahps.

Other than that, FANTATSTIC JOB/WORK!

Can I just say...

DAW.

Oh I Love it!
Skyfire and Starscream are so wonderful and Eclipse is so cute!
Skywarp will be so happy!
Was that a hint of TCxWarp or was that just my wishful thinking...

This is not the first story I have read where Starscream was bonded to both Skyfire and Megatron, though I will concede the circumstances are different in this story as compared to that other. Far different, so that makes this somewhat original.

I also have seen a story which hints that some of the traits of the Immortal Spark can be passed along as well. Yours is the first to come right out and give immortality to those who come in contact with it, not just hint. So basically yours is only the second story using both of those traits that I have seen. You just expanded and altered them. I haven't seen those stories on your faves, although you may have seen one or both of them. Nicely done and I was very impressed. By the way, Megatron was the main guess of mine after reading chapter 14 of Complications. Good job all around. Every story in this series will head straight to my faves.

Hmm, so it seems my suspicions may be right on the money.