I love it. and I like OC stories, i have one of my own and it should be out soon. anyway this story is Awsome!!

Its short and sweet. I think you need to get to the Mortal Kombat for this to be a Mortal Kombat fan fiction :-)

Why does John wear a mask if he so easily takes it off? Put hints of things like that or explainations :-)

There are a few typos that you may want to correct "weraing."

Time to go before I can read more.