| Reviews for Feud |
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Kawaii Hana 12/2/12 . chapter 6Awww... So how Raiha and Fuuko met was a Teacher-Pupil love story? It was so sweeeeeet... But Wow, I was stunned when Tokiya began to suddenly calling the "cocky" concubine his "Fututre wife" from out of nowhere... Arererere? Is somebody jealous? xD I'm off to read to the next chapter! - |
Kawaii Hana 11/28/12 . chapter 5Lol, just lime juice!? Its okay... Gosh what a chapter! Lots has happened already. ToFuu kissing, Joker's entrance! Ugh dammit, he was quite the playboy... I'm sure he'll bring about the comic relief in this story! And he's called Nanashi? Ooh I take it that you've read or at least heard about MAR, huh? And then there is Recca, in... the most random (not-so perfect timing) entry into the already crazy situation ever! And he met Yanagi too! Awwww... And now we have news of Raiha, too? Oh my god... In my opnion, the story is pretty much piciking up pace! Off to the next chapter! |
Kawaii Hana 11/28/12 . chapter 4Haha! What a cliffhanger! xD I love how these two bicker like cats and dogs! Even if they're royalty in this story, that part of them is not ever going to change! Sorry, I cannot make any longer review than this... I am to excited to read the next... xD Ta-ta! |
Kawaii Hana 11/28/12 . chapter 3Kyaaaa And so finally, the main stars of the show finally meet. Not bad! You know what? Imagining Tokiya as a merman just made me squeal... literally! I'm reading this at 12 am and I have to inhale a lot of air so the sound won't come out! Ahaha! Tokiya? OOC? Well, it can't be helped. This Proteus and Afiura, I take it that they are sort of his parents in this story. So I guess he's comfortable showing his softer side to them. Something happened to Mifuyu? Ooooh, I smell a twist coming up... or... I could be wrong... And lastly I find it extremely funny, that Recca - someone who hates Umis... somehow finds himself at the mercy of its army... as a trainee!? Hahaha! Karma is a very scary thing... xD Off to the next chapter... Damn, I might be finishing up the whole thing in one go... xD |
Kawaii Hana 11/28/12 . chapter 2First of all, I made some sort of a smirk when I read the following words: Mayon Volcano, Hikaru peso. Is it possible that the setting is in the Philippines? I can somewhat imagine how it looks like then... Well, jokes aside, I love the interaction between the parents. I can tell they are kings and queens, the type of you do not EVER want to mess with! Haaa... Prince Recca and Princess Fuuko must have had a rough childhood, huh? GaaH! A cliffhanger? Ok then? Off to the next chapter! |
Kawaii Hana 11/28/12 . chapter 1Hello, it's me! I am a member of the ToFuunatics Facebook group. I haven't been reading fics lately. I only had gotten hold of this story when you posted at our FB group that a... ermm... impatient reviewer sent you a not-so- nice review. So I thought if this reviewer was that upset you were not updating this story, then it means it must be really, really, really good. Well, I hesitated at first. I tend to avoid non-completed stories. But a member of our ToFuunatics group urged me too (quite easily) and so here I am. Anyway, this prologue is good start. You have definitely set the tone and setting of this story. I think I have not yet read an AU FoR story, and set in the medieval era too. It's quite exciting! Now I am hooked, girl! Off to read chapter 1... xD |
Guest 11/18/12 . chapter 20 bakit naman ganoon? bakit ang tagal mong mag-update? i would always check this story from time to time- still, no update... i have a hunch that you probably want to get us killed with all the cliffhangers, anticipations and all... you are so mean, madam... please give us a peace of mind... and don't let this precious one undone... |
Guest 6/30/12 . chapter 20 Hey! i've been waiting for 4 months now! wen the hell r u gonna update? |
inori 5/1/12 . chapter 20 will this story really end with just 1 or 2 chaps to go? TT thanks for this story! |
ricagrace19 2/14/12 . chapter 20Khryzle kawaii! I'm hooked to your stories..you made me... congratulationsssssssss for being a very good author. I am more of a silent reader and I just pop out everytime there is a very good author who writes very superb stories to remind them to continue their stories and finish it and write more..) you caught my attention.. you are awesome actually every chapter is full of emotion my heart keeps on thumping like theres no tomorrow I have palpitation because of the suspense everytime I will finish one chapter I am craving to go on with another one..I just started to read it last night and when I was finish reading it I realized it's already 6am in the morning.. Actually I have to finish my brothers thesis for his masteral but I found your stories more interesting and suddenly I dont have the urge to continue his thesis because my priority last night was to read all the chapters lol.. I DEMAND YOU TO UPDATE... please author-nim.. give us update.. I am in love now with tofuu and you made me crave for more of them.. thats why I read all your stories and ooooooooohhhh all of them are really excellent.. I am happy there is someone like you who writes tofuu in fiction.. keep on writing and I hope you will not abandon your fic. God bless... and oh happy Valentines day) -Gracey) |
Legacyay 1/20/12 . chapter 20 Oh man! i read you fan fic... just the day before yesterday... i read the entire thing and WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT HANGING LIKE THAT! I couldn't sleep for two nights thinking what could happen next... You have got to finish this story, as much as i know how much you hare to end it pleases do so before i go BONKERS! i really like it... so... you know. (sigh)... i can't wait a second longer... -(Grumbles) |
ladyui 12/30/11 . chapter 20 HEY! I read this fic in just one sitting! That's how hooked i was. So i was a bit disappointed when i reached the last chapter only to find that it's not yet complete :( please please please do finish it even if you last updated almost a week ako :( Thanks. I love your work! |
nur 10/25/11 . chapter 20 updated |
redhat62 10/2/11 . chapter 20Hey there! I know I'm more of a "new" reviewer since I don't believe I've ever sent one.. but I just thought you should know that I absolutely love this story! I read it last year after reading Flame of Recca for the first time and I was just blown away by your writing skills and the detail and effort you put into writing this story. Even reading this for the second time much later, I am still unable to quit reading and going to the next section even when I know what will inevitably come. And the suspense is killing me for the next one or two or three or however many you choose chappies to come. Yes, every peep has their spelling errors or this or that but I am truly intrigued by this story. Please don't give up your efforts of finishing this story, I know that myself along with countless other readers, whether they review it or not, would much appreciate this. Oh, and if you ever do need a BETA/spellchecker peep, I'd be more than willing to oblige :D 3 Redhat62 |
Clovergirl100 9/25/11 . chapter 14"If they're half as witty as you, they could survive. How ironic is that It made me laugh |