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DaniiAnn
2009-12-02 . chapter 2
OMFG DONT TELL ME THIS STORY IS FINISHED!?!? BETTER NOT BE!

Lols love the cloudzack smut!! Need more chapters update pls ;D

AkuRoku smut pls pls pls!

Need Axey and Roxie together NOW!! Yays!

*Fangirl squeal*

Luffles, your faithful reader, Danii x
Another stranger
2009-09-26 . chapter 2
I loved this story so far!I hope Sora get's with Riku soon!
Alleluia Rhapsody
2009-09-21 . chapter 2
sorry this review is so late, my computer wouldn't let me for the longest time >.< but a late review is still a review, and this definately deserves one. I totally wouldn't have guessed that Sora would be the cause of random sex between Cloud and Zach. pleasantly unexpected. I also like how Seifer gets called 'rapist' even though no one would believe Roxas :) God job, hope things are well with you!
DEMONICWALRUS
2009-09-11 . chapter 2
I'm reviewing for all the reasons you had for reviewing, pretty much :D
xcassedega
2009-08-18 . chapter 2
...



I love to see I'm a last resort.


;_;
himitsu shi
2009-08-14 . chapter 2
lol, poor sora, he is so gonna have nightmares! XD
TheaBlackthorn
2009-08-13 . chapter 2
That rocked!
sakuraswolf
2009-08-13 . chapter 2
XD i loled more than once ha!
this story is so rediculously and complicatedly random :3 i love it !
lol Roxas is a dumbass someone needs to tell him that Axel id ying inside for his sexy ass!
lmao
yumie-darkness123
2009-08-12 . chapter 2
poor sora! kind of poor asshole riku! yummy cloudzack! could it get any better? yes. you could update again soon <3


the chapter was great. crisis core cloud owns and i dont care what anyone says. roxy is a bitch but he isnt emo~ and sora SO deserves to bitch. seriously.

loved it
x
2009-08-12 . chapter 2
Hahhahaa I LOLed more than once
Festival of Asylum
2009-08-12 . chapter 2
I jizzed. Awesome chapter and yes Sora has every right to fucking bitch and the second KH made me lol because Sora's like "OHAIGUIZLOLYEAHIGONNARAEPANDKILLALLTHEORGY13MEMBERSWITHMYKEYLADESOBRBKILLINGORGYMEMBERS". Damnit Axel don't lose to Seifer get your man (Seifer belongs to hayner P:).
Pinuiini
2009-08-12 . chapter 2
"My Sora senses are tingling."

I think I died right there. >DD

So I saw that coming and I laughed twice.

And I like the way write Cloud & Roxy so yay 83

waiting for more~
yumie-darkness123
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
i love this. write more <3
Faye Silo
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
I really like it and I can't wait til the next chapter.

Love,
Faye Silo
FallingInTheOcean
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
Poor Axel. :3
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