I love all the weird and wonderful names and characteristics of these people.

You describe them incredibly well.

Another fantastic ending!

Please up date soon, you had me glued to the page.

You truly are an amazing writer!

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I hate you.

I actually hate you!

You outdo me in everything!

Joking, that was stunning Holli, really amazing!

Get your butt on the computer so i can talk to you :P

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Wow, you put words together really beautifully. I love - 'a stone creating ripples in already broken water'. UD soon

Wow - I don't know how old you are - but you're a friend of Emily's, right? I couldn't have written that a year ago. I couldn't write it now. You're incredibly talented.

ok, i didnt know you wrote. That was one surprise.

emily said you were good, but i hadnt read it then, so i couldnt second that.

but that was the biggest surprise i have had since susan boyle! no jokes!

its amazing, it really is!

it just flows like poetry, so easy, so natural for you!

maybe you could write about people being possessed by the Devil or something? with the gift that i have discovered you have, you could write anything!

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You wrote that a year ago?

It's freaking amazing!

That was beautiful, i love your description it's just wow.

I think you so should continue!

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