thats really good, i need more, continue

cool story and all but...(not trying to sound pickey
there are 20 rings of power(9317)

Ok... I guess, it'd be better if you had longer chapters and proof read it though as some bits have to be interprited to make sence. Also try to start new paragraphs for speech.

Realy cool! I love Sg1 And Harry potter!

What happens? I cant wait