This one is going good Peeper can't wait for the next chapter.

Personally, I'm not a coke drinker. But I guess the world would look different without it.

I have two nitpicks:
- resturant should be restaurant
- Bogg can't have seen Marilyn Monroe painted on a World War Two bomber, at least not at the time of WWII, because that's before she was famous (or had even picked the name)

whoa Bogg hurling, now that is a sight I would of loved to see on the show. Anyway great chapter. Now hurry and get the next chapter done, so I can find out what happens!

thanks, guys! I got this idea when I was work and they didn't have ANY diet coke!yikes...lol

chapter 2 is now up, so enjoy! I just hope ya'll have eatened lunch or dinner before ya read it!

Great start for the story Peeper...

Yay !!-a new Voyagers story. I was starting to get worried. Good topic and nice first chapter Peeper. I really like the line "Not with you" and the scene that followed.

Whoa! I enjoyed the first chapter. I can't wait to read chapter 2. Hey don't keep us waiting too long.