That was a touching story. I like that Violet's friends were there for her. And the love between her and Pete. Violet, Pete, and the baby would be a cute family together.

Love your story. It is a great idea to tell it from Violet´s point of view! And yeah, Pete is the father ;).

Loved this chapter. <3

Wow! I just love this piece, the way you chose to write the characters, the emotions in it and the end just fantastic.

I hope the new season give us something like this.

thanks for your creativity.

Ugh!i love rhis story!i love how violet's telling the story=)soo good. this needs to continue, your doing so well with it.

Loved both chapters! Can't wait for the update!

omg soo amazing. please update soon! oh and i liked how violet called him grasshopper, soo cute=)nice job, keep it up!im really liking the whole violet's prospective, it interesting.

This chapter was short, but sweet. It's nice to see both of the men in Violet's life by her side. As a Pete/Violet shipper, I really loved the part with them comforting each other. It looks as though they've found Krazy Katie and the baby--can't wait for chapter three.

oh that was such a great start! nice job!im interested to see how the next chapter will turn out=)!

Wow great start poor violet it made me want to cry when I first saw the end of the episode can't wait for more x

Interesting take on the finale. I hope that it's Pete that finds her in canon as well. I'm looking foward to the next chapter.