Disturbing, make it a little realistic. The device to change the chars was a good idea but other than that... very humorous and gross but it needs to be realistic. Like they learn to live in NY with their pokemon barely or something

pretty damn funny

What kind of sick rubbish is this? (sighs and shakes head) Whats the world coming to eh? Your last one was ok But this? It's just sick!

That was really nasty and stupid. Pokemon meets Friends. You could have done so much more with that.

I THINK THATS FUNNY!

S*IT

It's very different. Kinda creative

Ew! You freak!

I do like Poke'mon(Yeah, I'm 15, so shoot me)but MY GOD! ! That had NO F*R*I*E*N*D*S in it and it was ridiculous! I feel sorry for Squirtle and Pikachu!

I didn't like it too much...those poor pokemon

That was pretty gay!

what thew heck is wrong with you how dare you do that to poor joey and make him a savage beast hey but the rest rocked

What, are you kidding with this? This is the worst fanfic I've ever read (and I've read the lesbian love scene one) You should do everyone a favor and get the mental help you need.

I think I should get my 4 year old cousin to read this. He would understand it better than me. He's obsessed with Pokémon.

Sorry not a Pokemon fan so i couldn't get through it but i decided to "be a responsible reader" anyway.