holy shiz.. that was... gulp...
hot.

Wow! Is all I can say. Perfect

Love Tattward and Inkella!! This one-shot is so HOT!! I really enjoyed it.

<3

Aw, I loved this! It was hot & sexy & sweet and ... perfect. *sigh*

Now I can go to sleep with a smile on my face :)

This story is now on my faves list. I read it with a contented smirk. Bliss. :)

Whew! So hot! I love it. Thanks for writing this one-shot. I enjoyed it immensely.

wow i liked this one great story hope you make it more than a one shot

i love this it was so good!!

this is HOT...burning HOT


Hey I think you are my favourite 1 shit lemon writer!

Thank you!

Tension was lovely...continue perhaps? I'd love to know what happens when she brings him home to meet Charlie.

Really enjoyed your story. Wonderfully smuttastic! Congratulations on making it into the finals. Keep up the good writing.

Excellent.

Loved the chat at the beginning. It's a great medium for self-conscious Bella to be brave, no?

Thanks for your sharing your creativity. I love it.

Phew... hot damn. Lol loved this story. Good luck in the competition

AMAZING! *ung* even the instant messaging was fun and hot at the same time, and Bella saying she wanted to lick all of his tattoos NICE ;)

Poor Tattward couldn't handle Bella bending over, it got him all flustered hehehe.

He certainly made sure she kept her word on the licking and riding, the boy made sure Bella kept her word :P
Frigging great O/S :D