Axel's life in this is depressing. The whole "His job became the more important thing; he had bills to pay and groceries to buy and emergencies to fix.." and all. It's like a nightmare for any writer/artist/etc! ..Him attack-squeezing the apple made me grin, tho'. Yay for taking out stress. :D

Mm. "Good morning, Cat."

Could this be foreshadowing or am I reading too much into it? "For some reason Axel felt satisfied each time Demyx caved—he and Xigbar were right, after all." Like he's all jaded already, and not writing.. Cue finding inspiration!
And whoa, flashback. "“Good enough,” Axel said." Ahah. ♥

FUCK. I can't believe I didn't know this was up, god almighty, where have my prowling skills gone? I have sorely missed your mad AxelRiku skills, I thought you'd abandoned it.

You're still the queen of AxelRiku; I bow down to your awe-worthy awesomeness, and such.

Be chill, RA, and spread your red&silver-lovin' goodness to the rest of the world.

Hearts,
Icchan

Ooh I like this story already.
It's been a while since I've read an axel/riku fic and I'm excited for this one. : )
I really love your writing style, always so fluid and crisp and just enough detail that you get the idea without it weighing down everything else. Keep up the good work! I'm interested to see where this one goes, there's just something about this pairing that I really like : )

hm... you know...
I like it! ^.^
i also like the title! (despite the fact that i cannot PRONOUNCE it, lol)
its well written and the paragraph arent to mushed together.
keep going, okay?