Update immediately, please!

Update immediately, please!

The love confession seen was a bit abrupt and not Vulcan enough. Although very blunt, which is consistant with the Vulcan way, they simply wouldn't say love at least not until they are bonded. I was also surprised Sarek didn't react stronger to Amanda's mention that the only reason he cares for Sybok is because he is the son of a princess. For all the emotion he seemed to be showing towards her I was surprised you didn't mention a reaction or lack thereof to her comment about Sybok.

Also I was a bit confused during the coloring scene. Sarek was there sitting a few feet away right? I find it hard to believe that Amanda is telling a Vulcan child to express a little more emotion with the great Sarek sitting just a few feet away.

I think it was unrealistic to have Sarek say "I love you", those are words a Vulcan would never say. Everything a Vulcan does they do so for a logical reason. It would be realistic for Sarek to explain the logic in wanting to marry her instead of "I love you".

Awesome chapter! LOVE the way this is going, keep it up! Thank you!

Beautiful and a powerful read. I loved the not too fast and not too slow pace of the story. I absolutely love the interactions between the characters. It was wonderful how sarek believed her. I especially loved the last few lines, with him being so protective.
I really hope you continue on with this story. It's a wonderful read

So glad you picked this story back up. Thanks.

oh, I am so glad that someone believed her. I know she can rescue her family... with a bit of help. I hope there is a bit of a longer chapter to come and I love the interaction here showing a not so poised amanda. Good job.

Great story. Please continue. Can't wait for the next chapters.

So exiting!I wish the chapter would have been longer :) Please update soon.. maybe we can also see Sarek in some hand to hand combat-action? Would love this.

I thought Amanda was astrophobia and aerophobia. I hope this adventure will cure her of that. Thanks for updating finally! ;) I had once given up hope that you would continue this story yet again. I know life can get very busy. :) I hope you update sooner rather then later. That was a very "high end" meeting she ran into. WOW.
You wrote: "Hello there, Amanda, what's going on?" I thought that was kind an odd way for her father to address her. I felt kind of bad when Amanda told her Sarek her family was all she had. Thanks for writitng in the brief emotion Sarek was feeling. Bina

Doesn't Amanda have astrophobia and aerophobia? How's she gonna cope rescuing her family in space?

Thanks for updating. I think this was a very good chapter.

Sarek is so badass!

I hope you get time to update this soon.