Excellent one-shot. I really enjoyed it.

This was beautiful. I can't exactly explain why, but it was.

such a sweet story.

love it

Wow, that was so incredible.

A great story. Very well written.

Oh my gosh. How perfect was that? I don't think I've ever read anything so beautiful, to see their life pass, their kids grow up and older and have kids of their own. That was amazing. I'm smiling, and I sort of want to cry. It was, gosh, wow, I'm floored.

This is such a beautiful because it was some perfect fairy tale (glares daggers at Breaking dawn book)but because it was real and honest living.I love how you had Jake and Bella rekindle their friendship and then into a relationship.I love their kids and how they separated for a while the got back together.I was really touched when you wrote the part about how Jonah writing.I love to read stories where Jake and Bella are parents.

Goodness, this story is brilliant! The way you wrote this couple is so wonderfully done it's amazing to see a perfect combination of fluffs, cuteness, comfort, angst and all the daily things written in such great style of yours. Totally love this fic!

Aw, this was really sweet I'm glad Bella finally sees the light!

I'm not even a little bit embarrassed that I cried through a lot of this.

Very heartwarming!

A really beautiful story! It's a perfect "what-if". I love it when Bella realizes that she and Jacob had grown old, it's kind of heartwarming in a way. I wish Jacob and Bella were together!

Thanks for sharing your story!

This is well written. A good story, although I really have a problem with people getting divorced and then remarried. Just a personal issue I guess. Good job.

How it should have been.

That is a really good story and I loved that she was with Jacob!