Foremost, I love it! How the storylines draws out the characters trust for one another and I still remember one of the videos you showed me. I could form a mental image of both of them in this situation which gave me a perfect view of their relationship. She is not stupid but sometimes vulnerable. Who would have thought that the guy would insert the drug in her drink... Regardless to what had happened, I'm grateful that Jane came on time and nothing happens to Lisbon while the Michael creep is still out there. Apart from that, I love how this two understood one another, he cared a lot for her, to take care of her for the whole night and hold her when she is almost exposed to risk of being harmed and attacked. Very captivating! :)

aww.. that was nice. I got the community alert, and i was very excited to read this. and it did not disappoint!

wow, this was really well done. I really liked it. Thanks for writing it.

Oh I totally love this,I've just seen the episode where he saysa that to her and it was sweet then, but this is uber sweet! I love that she thought of him whens she realised what had hapended to her and the fact Jane was so concerned and made sure he did all he cold to help her. The end scene was very cute with Jae huging her (and Libson letting him!) when he reality sets in. Totally loved it! x

Amazing story! Very intense! I'm glad that Jane was there for her and was able to help her! Wonderful ending!

AW! Great job on this! Evil Michael dude! I just don't understand people like that...horrid horrid people.

This story was so touching, so moving. A wonderful way to show the relationship between Jane and Lisbon without having to make it be anything more than what's possible from what we've seen.

Also, well written, well paced, good dialog.

Finally, great first Mentalist story from you, I hope you'll write more!

I absolutely loved this story! It was well-written and beautifully crafted. I felt it really exemplified the trust Lisbon sub-consciously has in Jane. It was really lovely.

Thank you!

Great story! I love the trust issue between them. Very interesting scenario.

Wow this is really your first fanfic? I wouldn't have guessed, you did a really great job there.

And I don't think it's too out of character for Lisbon to act like this and go to a bar to get loose - I mean everybody needs to do that every once in a while.

And that you have her call Jane when she needs help - just wonderful (well, I'm a shipper for Jisbon - can't help it)!

I hope you continue writing!

Wait.

Its complete? No, you should continue this! Its really good :D

You actually *need* to add more on, I kinda' felt like it ended to soon!

The next bit could be Jane going with Lisbon to the hospital and comforting her, and helping her bust the guy, I wanna' read about Jane punching Micheal in the face! That would be good ;)

Continue! Or else...:P

I shall be waiting ;) x

Cool story - Jane to the rescue and being a good friend.

i loved it awesome story

Aw! I'm so glad Jane saved her. Poor Lisbon :(. Great job, I really like this! :)

Wow, that was really good!