My interest has been very much sparked by this story :D I'd love to read more! Can't wait to see how it turns out =3

No! Onslaught can't be dead!
Oh well, I hope you continue this, it's really interesting and I love how you went in depth with Brawl's character. We don't get to see much of the poor guy, keeping going, it's great so far!

"'I like the idea,' Rodimus said and First Aid allowed himself to grin. This was a good plan! It could work! With a little guidance the Combaticons could become, if not productive members of society then at least less destructive ones!"

This line just made me giggle hysterically. Had to pause and tell you. I'm only just finished with the first chapter but what I've seen is great so far! Rodimus especially - just Prime-y enough without being either an Optimus-clone or Hot-Rod-part-2.

:( Poor Brawl.

“Deal!” Rodimus said over First Aid’s protests. “Congratulations First Aid, you’ve got your very own pet Combaticons. I expect you to take them for walks and make sure they’re fed and swat them when they screw up.”

I love Rodimus. XD

Such a sad story. Those poor Combaticons. I feel for them deeply. This is a well written story with very interesting characters. You portray them well. I do hope they go investigate the signal, even if it turns out to be a ghost. I look forward to your next update.

Very interesting...

Not too bad, I'll be watching out for this.