i hated the fact that Tanya would do something like that to Edward didn't she clearly see that or heard what Edward had just said to her that he is engaged to Bella. i hate Tanya i will never ever like her, she's such a bitch and slutty whore, wow i never thought i would type out those words in whole life before, i'm glad that Edward told Tanya to leave before he rips out her throat.

UPDATE! I love this story!

LOVED!

i liked this chapter. edward and bella standing up to tanya was great. all cullen protecting (did i spell that right?) bella was fantastic. it shows she's part of the family and you can't mess with her.

I LOVED IT

i absolutely love this fanfic

OMG I was just at the chapter 17 andI was thinnking it woud be cool if Charlie caught them amd suddenly boom! He does thax

Omg this is hilarious Thank you so much!

I laughed so hard at this chapter. I read your stories all the time over and over again Please write more soon.

good start! And I agree with you, Ms Myers turned Bella into a tease, she wanted him for so long, then when she gets her chance she backs off. Of course this is Ms Myers bad story telling, chnging the story mid plot. She forgot the fanatsy of the virgin bride all in white for her wedding. She has to back off so this can happen!

great job

I love lemony storys

For chapter 26 you should do the whole family have sex in one room

i like lemon storys

This was interresting