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RainingBlackSnow 5/29/12 . chapter 19
I am so glad i'm a Vegetarian, after this story I don't even want to look at sausages. This story was FANTASTIC BABY!(ha ha BIGBANG reference) I liked how you wrote Tom and, much to my surprise, you didn't make all of Harry's friends whiney b*. I'm now going to read more of your stories. Hast-La-Pasta!
Mythomagic-Champion 5/8/12 . chapter 19
love the x-men reference
Impstar 5/6/12 . chapter 19
Huh. Good story, but Voldemort's background was a little shaky. His actions... well, to say getting carried away would be an understatement.
xDarklightx 5/4/12 . chapter 19
It was a great story.
Resident Evil Lionhart 4/20/12 . chapter 19
You actually made Tom believable, holy cow! I think I like this Tom, much better than the Voldemort who believed that Love didn't exist and that purebloods were better than everyone else, even though he was half.
Here's a small challenge (Tell me if you'll take it up or not Make a Harry Potter story, where Tom Riddle was the main character and was like he was in this story- respectable, respectful, gentlemanly, kind when he didn't have to be mean, the anti-hero as you mentioned. You don't have to make him friends with Harry Potter, but I don't want him to be enemies either. Make a greater evil, if you must. Maybe even make them work together once, like he worked with Hermione in this story. Either way, make him not the evil Harry has to work against. (like we found out Sirius wasn't actually a traitor)
MsIloveVampires 4/18/12 . chapter 19
why was Tom killed off?
MsIloveVampires 4/18/12 . chapter 14
ugh thats disgusting human sausages :p
MsIloveVampires 4/18/12 . chapter 10
i thought petunia was ugly...lmao i cant wait to see the reaction of the two when they find out *smirks*
mrs moonie 4/18/12 . chapter 3
Why wasn't harry at Hogwarts with everyone else? If school was in session how was it that he was not in attendance.
DmitriZhukov 4/15/12 . chapter 19
I really love how this story is written and you portray emotion. Bravo!
chichi and kaka-kun 4/5/12 . chapter 19
Great story it was really goooodddddddddddd!
goodguy4u282008 3/13/12 . chapter 19
that was good and sad at parts i cried like a baby
Spottedpool 3/11/12 . chapter 19
i love the ending! though i do feel sorry that tom was killed. vernon got what he deserved. great story!)
lolatmyass 3/11/12 . chapter 19
ahhhh i wish i didnt know much about physiology so i could've just thought that vernon's been dissected alive but alas.. any scalpe and a little cut with it on his fat body would've been a dead give away for anyone with little more than average medical knowledge that vernon is very alive... dead body may drip the blood when you 'chop' it but it does not bleed when you 'slide' its skin but alive ones do...
Arya54329 2/8/12 . chapter 19
i love it ! i think veron deserved it. i only wish that vernon WAS buried alive, but alas, you can't have everything.
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