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Eldersprig
2009-11-04 . chapter 2
>> Nabiki was unhappy about not being able to take some nude >> photographs of Ranma's female form. It was criminal how cute >> Ranma was as a girl, and it would be even worse if she didn't >> use that beauty to full effect. There simply didn't seem to be >> anyway to force Ranma into letting her take advantage of him. H>> e seemed just as intelligent as any human, perhaps even more>> so, and he had magic that she had no clue on the limit of.>>

So... Nabiki is an idiot. She *wants* to ** off a powerful, supernatural creature. Just like in canon. She never has any consequences to her actions cause its a comedy.
Deucalion02
2009-10-26 . chapter 2
i have to sya that i never thought of ranma as a dragon before... wolf, cat, demon,god, vampire but never dragon.
Jerry Unipeg
2009-10-18 . chapter 2
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Well done on Nabiki. I am wondering, what Kasumi can do, I bet she a dragon too!
Jerry Unipeg
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
GREAT START! (*x4) Great twest to the story.
RockBane
2009-10-10 . chapter 2
Huh, I guess charming his cloths to deflect water that's less then his body weight would work or won't it?

I mean, under my Random Thought story, I have Naruto turning into a Eastern Dragon and when he's a dragon, the Kyuubi being 'free' although the fox is cursed to transform into a stag... Karma Good or Bad is what that's under.
Blackdex
2009-09-29 . chapter 2
hm, ciao
Salamander Hanzo
2009-09-27 . chapter 2
nice
Diablo200030002002
2009-09-26 . chapter 2
Pretty good chapter look forward to the next update.

Wondering will ranam meet the Diggers be amusing to see some humans capable to going agaist dragons and meeting the oen who Defeated the dreaded dreadwing.
Bobboky
2009-09-25 . chapter 2
awesome
Rune Tobor
2009-09-25 . chapter 2
Well this is different. I'd like to see Ranma end up with Kasumi if you can do it. I feel she may have some magical heritage that is deeply buried. One fic has her as Belldany's mortal sister. Sharing a womb with a goddess would change anyone I think. The fic has Kasumi and Belldany as twin sisters. According to the fic gods and goddesses reincarnate every so often and last time Belldandy did that she did so as Kasumi's twin. I suggest that Kasumi have the following gifts: Long life, Immunity to most spells, and a link to Belldandy. The link would be a passive sort of thing that lets Kasumi draw on a very small part of Belldanys presence. That is a Kasumi has an aura that is a shadow of Belldany's peacefull one. Belldandy would also know how Kasumi's life is going in a vague sort of way. This means that Belldandy would likely know about Ranma being a dragon and in Nerima. Please update soon.
sh8ad8ow
2009-09-24 . chapter 2
altough I do like this story I would like to see your story BDandN been updated alot more than this one if you could.
phoenix.ru
2009-09-24 . chapter 2
While I did have fun reading the story this bratty variant of Ranma is quite a ... loathsome being >_<
deitarion/SSokolow
2009-09-23 . chapter 2
Nice to see another update to this... but, for me, the jury's still out on what you did to Nabiki.

Unlike most people, I find it distasteful to send an antagonist to the bottom of the totem pole... even if it's a new totem pole. (Whether I like or dislike what you've done with Nabiki will depend on what you do with this new plot element) More specifically, being low on the totem pole in RL, I've developed a preference for seeing schemes backfire in an impermanent manner appropriate and scoped to the individual schemes.

In this instance, there are a couple of plot elements you could use to balance things out: (I'm kind of hoping for both)

First, if Nodoka's "A shame she's just a human though" and Nabiki's new nature is foreshadowing, then that turns what Nabiki will have to put up with into a temporary setback... of course, that should come later. It's the kind of subplot to be developed slowly.

The second plot element is the one you could start into right away which would really help to balance things out and, at the same time, would draw an artistic parallel with the original Ranma series: Have Nabiki refuse to accept the social implications of being a Wyrm. If she does that and relies on her greater familiarity and social-connectedness with all things Earthrealm, you avoid the risk of giving the impression that you're punishing a character you don't like just for being who they are and you have the opportunity for Nabiki to slowly wean Ranma off his racist draconic arrogance the way the curse did for canon Ranma's macho sexism.

That'd really be a clever plot to use because you'd be paralleling the core "Ranma and Akane fight because Genma taught Ranma to be sexist" plot from the original story with "Ranma and Nabiki fight because Nodoka taught Ranma to be speceist". Just keep in mind that, with Ranma cursed to be a girl rather than a Wyrm, Nabiki will need to take Akane's old role of "the one who penalizes chauvinistic arrogance" as well as the original curse's role of "Undeniable proof that the strongly held belief is wrong". (DefN: Chauvinist: a person with a prejudiced belief in the superiority of his or her own kind)
John Tannius
2009-09-23 . chapter 2
What's funny is even with Ranma acting like Pe-wee or better still Fauntelroy, He's still Ranma. Of course this now has the potential to put Nabiki into the running as a fiancé since she could become a full dragon the same way Fauntelroy's two wives did.

I can hardly wait for more. Ranma/Gold Digger stories are rare. Good ones are almost non-existent.
RanmaChaos
2009-09-23 . chapter 2
Good Chapter!!Please continue to UPDATE!!
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