Good chapter, I like how this started out. It was very well-written, and I like reading a story written in Link's POV since I don't tend to find many of those around. I'm really curious as to what's going on and why that Stalfo suddenly appeared. As for some critique, all I would have to say is I wish it was a bit longer and maybe had some more dialogue. Besides that, though, I really like it. I'm really happy you decided to continue this, and I look foward to an update! :)

I am really excited to see you have continued this story- there are far too few Malon and Link stories. Update soon!

It may have been short, but this was very well-written. I liked it. I really like your writing style; it's very elegant. This was very refreshing and a good read, and left me wanting more. If you continue this, I'll definitely come back to read more. I'm going to put this on my alerts, so I hope you update. Good job, keep writing! :)

No way can you end there! I simply loved it! You really rock, and please, continue...
I love a good Link X Malon story and I can see that this is one of them! I hope you'll continue, have I asked that of you before? XD