Very cool fic. I find that I don't see nearly enough monologues anymore, and it's refreshing to find one so well-written. Plus, I'm a fan of the morbid. I mean, what's a good fic without some depressing concepts? Really. I also liked the analysis on Duo. He really is a lot deeper than people like to give him credit for being, and I feel you portrayed that pretty well.

That was great! I don't normally read just Duo fics but I think you've got his character down really well. Man, it's soo sad that he feels that way...

Eeeeee, Vuuuul! Must you do the rather melancholy monolouges? I think you do this just to angst things as much as possible. I blame Ruby for that.

But all that aside, I think you looked deeper into Duo's character than most people like to go. Everybody seems perfectly content with the happy-go-lucky side we see. But not you...oh no. _ Good work, good work.