|Reviews for Fifth Avenue Heartache|
| Lacrymoza 12/4/12 . chapter 10
| edwardfiend 3/27/12 . chapter 10
I absolutely loved this! If you did revamp it and get it published I would definitely purchase a copy. This was one of the most entertaining pieces of fiction I have read in quite a while. :)
| watty08 11/5/11 . chapter 10
Read your story in one sitting and I really liked your take on Northanger Abbey. Very clever idea to do a romance novel with the story and very relateable too. I hope you decide to do more Austen-writings, if law school allows it.
| Xiah-sensei 4/4/11 . chapter 10
Aww this is such a sweet story!
| SW 1/30/11 . chapter 10
Great story - I totally agree with you about the lack of NA novels, and I really enjoyed your story. I read the whole thing in one gulp and fell in love with Henry all over again. Thanks!
| gg 12/22/10 . chapter 10
thank-you, Thank-you, THANK-YOU! This was a wonderful addition to Jane Austen fanifction and I enjoyed it greatly. :) Great work (this deserves more reviews than it has!).
| Merken- Chile 7/30/10 . chapter 10
Thanks for your story. I dindt enjoyed it; I was delighted by it.
I loved how you portrayed the characters in modern situations and settings ( who could imagine that Eleanor was a fan of Wii?)
Thanks again and keep writing!
| AmyNW 7/2/10 . chapter 10
What a wonderful story! This chapter was great. I loved the younger sisters teasing them about kissing, and Henry's proposal. I remember that turtle when I went once to visit my cousin at U of Maryland! Again, great job, and thank you!
| CGinny 7/1/10 . chapter 10
oh, the ending was gr8... i loved it (as i did with the whole adaptation)!
thanks for writing one of the most wonderful JA's fanfic!
i adore you!
| AmyNW 6/18/10 . chapter 9
I think when you last posted, you were sick with the swine flu, and I got a little worried when you didn't post again for a long time. I'm glad to know it was busyness and not illness that kept you from writing!
Mmm, the kisses were nice! And Henry is still a doll. But will he think (or maybe will his father lie?) that Catherine deliberately left without saying goodbye?
| ElvishKiwis Venerated Ancestor 5/27/10 . chapter 9
I'm still here!
Belated Congratulations on the Law school thing. No wonder you haven't had much time for writing.
The story is sure moving on quickly to it's conclusion. I am a bit disappointed that you missed out the scene where she gets told off by Henry for having let her imagination run away from her though. That is my favourite scene in the original and I was looking forward to seeing how you handled it. *pouts*
Still I liked the relationship between Ellie and Catherine, especially the bit where Ellie let her take her own pace through that... Guggenheim thing they went to visit (what was that anyway, a museum? art gallery? historic site? I kinda want to know because it reveals another side to Catherine than the 'Sports Jock-Girl' side)
I do think you have made Henry rather shallow. You haven't given him any opinions or passions for anything. You haven't even told us where he works or lives. The scene in NA where they all go to his house is an important plot move because it is there that Gen Tilney gives every hint he can that he expects his son to marry Catherine. It makes his about face far more shocking in the light of his obvious encouragement of their relationship. Your version has no confident hopes to dash, just feelings hurt. Do you see what I mean?
You did the reaction to James's email well. You really caught the heart of the matter.
Thanks for the update.
| soccergurl31294 5/26/10 . chapter 9
gr8 chapter! please update soon!
| noukinav018 5/25/10 . chapter 9
whoa! so much suspense!
What was Herny going to say? I hv an idea of it.. but don't know if I may be mistaken :D
pls do keep writing
law school! my cousin is in her 1st year. hectic! really hectic!
my dad's a lawyer too and most of his family members are lawyers XD
but I am not XD
| CGinny 5/25/10 . chapter 9
gosh, please continue asap... i beg you!
| noukinav018 5/24/10 . chapter 8
uh oh... the trouble is about to come when Mr Tilney knows the truth.
aw H/C are really cute
I'm getting nervous seeing that u have posted this chapter a lot of time ago!
please don't forget us!
do keep writing **sniffs**
I'll be waiting for another juicy and awesome chapter soon
pretty please with a cherry on top?