ZOMG! Sometimes I wonder if Sai knows anything about sex. And then you wrote this and I laughed. This was great. :) .<) :)

o i liked it :o you did a good job showing how 'to the book' Sai is ^.^

Hrrm.
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I don't think you failed at all.
I rather liked it.

Comment: you channeled Sai well

That was quite the amusing read and I can tell you that you definitely did a good job of portraying Sai. Very nicely done. :3 Kinkiness ftw~ x3

I always love the stuff you write, and this was no exception. Very unusual imagery, even more so than your usual writing... very intersting, this fic got me thinking :)

^^
This was fun.
Sai experiencing his (first?) masturbation, and he's thinking of Naruto. Truly interesting.

I'm a NaruSasuNaru fan, but I actually like Sai better than Sasuke in the manga...