Oh. These poor characters. What is it about the NT crew that just begs us to cause them physical and emotional pain? Surely it's not that we're evil. No. That cliffhanger? Evil. But the physical and emotional pain you got going here? Oh, that's beautiful.

Love your Riley. He needs a hug. And I thought your Abi POV was perfect. Lol. Loved the last line. I don't get to read as much fanfic as I used to, so I was happy when I popped on here and found this. Yay!

So...you should update. I vote for immediately, though if sooner than immediately were possible, I'd vote for that instead.

Blessings!

Aw Riley xp I like the part with the police officer lol. Overall good job...just try to update a bit faster, that would be totally awesome^^

Well ,they're safe... for now. Update soon!

You really had to ask? It was fantastic! Per usual. I love the part with Abigail and the officer, but I really can’t wait to hear more about Riley. So you better not drop off the face of the earth again. I’d nearly forgotten about this story until you updated, which gave me a wonderful excuse to go and read it again. :D

Awesome chapter, Riley seems to be getting the brunt of the bad luck, please update soon.

Good! very good! I like it! there's almost a father-son bond between riley and ben. it's very good! I hope that you can update soon!:D

NO! How can you leave us at another cliffhanger?!?!?! AURRG! *composes self* WIth that being said I love this chapter... poor Riley and his claustrophobia! Let the be rescued soon please!

ok this is so great. update soon. its so sad when really good writers are busy. wah. ok this was so fun though, and its getting places. and of course where are ben and riley going to end up. hurry! thanks for writing

Oh no! Riley! Poor Riley!

I love Riley whumpage! Thank you for adding in some Riley whumpage! Please, please update soon! I need to know what happens!

Good job!

-Rascal

YES ! Welcome back!

I absolutely love it! And there so was a cliffhanger... just in the middle and not the end!! Please update soon!

So much suspense! I cannot stop fretting! And now Riley's all concussed and unconscious -- I hope he wakes up and isn't in a coma! And Ben's not exactly at peak condition, either! Hopefully Abigail will get to the rescue in time! Though I did appreciate the little joke at the end about Abigail and cop cars. Tension relief!

Anyway, keep up the good work! :)

oh my gosh, that was AWESOME! :) haha
and you have been doing such an amazing job writing in the different characters' perspectives - I swear, I can practically hear them saying everything you've written :) it's almost like it's part of the movie script. that's completely awesome.

keep up the great work!! I can't wait to read more!!

HOLY FLIFFING GOD IT'S GOOD! PLEASE I MUST HAVE MORE!1

Let me start off by saying that I'm glad you're alive and I've missed your awesome writings! Haha. Anyway, that being said, amazing amazing chapter. Abigail is fine. Great actually. I loved this whole chapter. So intense! Especially the Ben and Riley scene. Yeah, that would be classified as a clifhanger just so you know. Haha. My only complaint is that this chapter was way too short because I just want to keep reading and reading until the end. Of course then it would be over and I would have nothing to read which would suck but my curiousity would be satisfied. *sigh*
UPDATE SOON!