This was a really simple piece, but I liked how you portrayed Flich's love for Hogwarts. The way he's shown in the books is a lot different, and I think this was a wonderful perspective.

Great job. :)

Wow, this was an adorable story. I really liked how shy Lysander was because I think that it's something I wouldn't expect from Luna's son.

Anyway, great job!

I absolutely loved this. It was the cutest way to get Scorpius and Rose together, and just...I loved it. :) Plus, all the uses of Shakespeare quotes is really witty, and you did a great job with that.

Great job!

I liked this a lot, mostly because Lily seemed indifferent to everything, which I think is a good transition from hating James, to liking him. It's almost like giving her time to think.

Also, I liked the way you told the story - it wasn't anything specific that was between Lily and James, but was more of summer days, which was what you obviously meant to portray.

Anyway, great job. :)

Beautiful! A lovely idea, and wonderful characterisation. I particularly like that they don't get the spells right all the time, and also that their grief isn't obvious, but still apparent. Well done!

I am in awe. This is beautifully written, the relationship between the two girls so tangible I feel like they're in front of me. And that last section was so heart-breaking, without being soppy or cliched. Beautiful.

Oh, lovely! I like this confused Draco, so much in denial. I like your writing of Astoria as well. The last line in parentheses is particularly well written, a nice final touch.

One word: Ah

Short and sweet and beautiful. I love how you build a relationship over a few words. I like how Susan and Terry know each other.

All the Best,

Kerney

Lovely job writing about a character who (until you explained it) I had never even heard of. Excellent job!

Absolutely fantastic. I love the way you wrote the end- I loved the whole thing. Excellent job!

This was so sad, but really, really well written. You captured Merope and all of her emotions wonderfully- excellent job with this piece!

Really sweet, and really well written. I loved the relationship between Susan and Terry- very nicely done!

Fabulous job. I'd never really thought of what it must have been like for Andromeda, all those years living with Bellatrix and Narcisaa. Lovely job!

Excellent story! You captured the relationships between all the characters wonderfully- very well done.