Great story! Please update soon

This is good. You should update soon.

Hey, thats not fair! I suddenly have a strong need to know what happened! Do you think there's a chance you might update in the near future, that you started the second chapter? If its help with the dialogue you need, I can help with that. I am a beta in my spare time.

BookRose

This is the last story on fanfic for the Becoming Jane movie, that I have read. I didn't think I would like it, but I really got cought up in it. I think you have done a very good job. I would love to see where it goes and what happens to our star crossed lovers. Your take on this movie is very fresh and daring. Good Job! Please finish it, I will be waiting for thw updates!

Please continue this soon! you were off on such an awesome start!

Excellent! I think you should keep going with it. Its very original, I'd like to see where you go with this.