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Reviews for: A Sisters Wish Soun
dana-san
2009-12-20 . chapter 1
The wish series has always presupposed that some thing in the set up will change to allow for playing with the plot and development of characters in new directions. My only quibble is that it should be called Soun's wish. Keep it going - would love to see some development of Soun as a competent dojo owner rather than an idiot. The Nodoka turning to Soun's wife - yeah that may be throwing it to the fans, but could turn into some true character development for Soun and Genma = who knows?
Bobboky
2009-07-17 . chapter 2
good
Janissa@sonic.net
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
HI
This is an interesting start to what promises to be a good story. I hope you continue it and thank you for creating it.
Kafwoosh
2009-07-17 . chapter 2
Feels ooc and fanon
Kafwoosh
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
Needs proofreading - but the story is good.
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