lovely so sexy. one culture a segway to another...who would have thought. Very arousing.

That was such an interesting but in a good way story, I enjoyed this as I do all your stories. Thank you and Well Done!

very awesome and you didn't fudge anata. anata is often used by women when addressing their husbands. i think the only thing you did fudge a little is that edward would be written in katakana, not kanji. sorry if i seem rude about... blame my sensei for beating the different alphabets into my head. i think you should do more japan based stuff... it's a very sensual and romantic culture.

Wow. Just wow. I loved every word, from the very first to the very last.

I really enjoyed this story)

that was so good and HOTTTTTTTTTTTT!1

Okay this was seriously hot like one of the hotest I've ever read hot.

Love! Love! Loved This!

Great Story. 3

Wow!

Very interesting...)

I really enjoyed this one shot. I am also a sucker for Edward POV.

This is such an incredibly hot story. I have not read the story attached to it (I will be PMing you the moment I finish this review) but I love this.
I like how hot and yet somehow sweet it is. I love established relationship fics, two people who are making the choice to be together, to be happy is so much more than the rush of first love (though that is pretty good too).

You have a fantastic writing style and I look forward to delving into more of your fics.

Hey there, I would REALLY like to finish reading Apples and Oranges. How do I do that? Also, why is Frenemies no longer available? That was the best fanfiction story I've ever read-equal parts filthy and hilarious!

Thanks,

S

I loved it.

Keep writing,

Motherduckatschool