I really can't see this as Marius. It's a beautiful story, but Marius is just...too much of a whining brat really to have any sort of emotion. Even with Cosette it was puppy love.

If Marius became...Combeferre, for instance, or even (to some) Grantaire, then I'd say it would be much more understandable.

It's simply the characterization that I have issue with, you write beautifully.

awsome! very wonderfully done!

TS

aw...i like this pairing! good story..it's soo cute and sweet keep up the good work and writing

*SQUEL!
it's so cute. Enjolras/Marius is my favorite Les Mis pairing... but noone else likes it.
Anyway, this is wonderful! good job!*school is performing Les Mis next week* EEK! wish me luck!

What a beautiful piece! this certainly gives depth to the charcters I believed I knew so well esp Enjolras. Thank you!

Oooh Marius/Enjolras slash! Do you know how many hours I spent looking for some. Thank you! Amazing story, too. *sniffles* Absolutely heartbreaking!

god! im so SICK of hearing every dilemma being referred to america! GREAT writing! very vivid, but i just get all pissy whenever i hear that one line, wherever i go, "its better in america" blah blah blah, not really, besides this is the 1800s or such, things were bad EVERYWHERE no matter what suituation you were in, one tiny reason i loved les miserables (besides the obvious) was because it was all set in france, everything was so old and european, iv never read the book but they've prolly mentioned some other countries but not something so irritating as that

kay thats it, and all you patriots don't bother emailing me, you'll be ignored-Sara-Sara

i think this was pretty good... you're a good writer, but i dont think i liked how they kissed each other ick but the story is really, really good. keep up the good work.

"No more talk of darkness, forget these wide-eyed fears...
Um. Sorry. It's the roof element that got me. And, well, the Mushy!Enjy. But it's well-written, I must say.)

Oh my. I hate slash but this was good. very, very good. Well done.

*sob*Poor Enjy! That's REALLY GOOD!

Ah. This is very nicely done. First of all, it's refreshing to see correct spelling and the like). Secondly, I like your portrayal of Marius he's not dumb, as some fics make him out to be and the relationship feels plausible. Thank you; this is one of the better things I've seen recently. Hope to see more from you.