Looks good. Please update soon.

A wonderful story please continue.

Great stroy please update soon

So it's three Cylon-Human Hybrids about to be hatched now? Or did Kara not get the same treatment that Kendra received? I only ask because it's been a long time since I read that part of the story.

Solid chapter. Interesting interplay between Kendra and the messenger Six.

Interesting story behind Shaw. Little too convienient that she's Sam's ex-lover and Roslin's godchild, but I liked the whole experimentation side. Would like to see her suffering some negative side affects from what the cylons did to her for a smidge of realism. Enjoyable read, considering how far out of the way the show went to show Kendra as damaged goods so the reader would feel better about her heroic sacrifice. Looking forward to her reunion with Cain and how Adama would react having forwarning about what Cain did to her XO.

Cool. :)

Nice.

It's an interesting story, but I really want to encourage you to take the time to go over the grammar and syntax more carefully. There are a lot of mistakes here, and overall they make the text seem quite disjointed. You should also be on the alert for anachronisms. No one in this story would be putting in their two cents' worth. It should read "two cubits."

good flow to the reading, liked your rework of this epidode. only saw a couple of word use areas. first on was where you said, "they should around." i think you actually meant, "they stood around," instead. second was where you wrote, "he nodded," where i take it that you meant, "he noted." other than these two it didn't look too bad one first read.

Yes! Finally another chapter. Please don't keep us waiting for the next one

Life is a twisted path that we all must navigate, but as for this story's latest up date it was worth the wait.

Epic!

Nice update, looking forward to the next one!

Nice update. Just wonder how long before the people in the fleet realize that Kendra is now part cylon.