Oh, so much emotion and power in this brief story!

Wow!

Incredible!

Love, Robin

Interesting idea.

Heart-breaking little ficlet, Weesta.

You really gave John a run for his money saving his eldest son there. And I don't even want to dwell on how bad this must have been for Dean either.

"...but John was too stubborn to listen to Bobby or Jim" I bet!

Ohh... Wonderfully beautiful.

wow very powerful story! love the imagery

Aww *sniffle* Poor messed up Winchesters! I wish John had been able to tell Dean out loud that the poor boy had nothing to apologise for! The story of Dean's life methinks...

I was getting shivers while reading this. Very nicely written. I loved the descriptions and imagery here, of the water, of the seaweed dragging Dean to his death, of how no one could tell the difference between John's tears and the sea.