Hurry up and contnue this please!! I like Renn and yoh (friendship) and you don't see many around! Please continue??

...Please?

You've got a good story, but you should try go over your punctuations. I'd like to help, but I'm not a beta. Other than that, great job.

Please continue sometime before forever!

Aw I'm glad Mari didn't die! I really like her, but I'm worried about what splitting up the group will mean for Yoh! Keep going, this is really good!

Really Interesting, please update soon!

you you evil lol but any way that was nice a brother moment(aw)

Ooh no I really like your action! This is great, I liked Kanna's sneaky way of splitting Ashcroft up and using the distraction to hide two of them. Very good! And that was an evil cliffhanger! Hope you update soon

Ahaha YES! I love the Hana Gumi, they make me smile very much =D I love the way they see this as a "game", haha I can't wait to see what they're going to try and do! I hope there's going to be more action in the next chapter. Also, I wonder which one doesn't want death... Certainly not Kanna, perhaps Mari? Not sure ^^ Update soon!

Anna xx

ok well i start whit the beginning :
-to little action(i guess i going to be more action in the next chapters)
-oh i wonder who is the female whith no intention of death(maybe mari has a crush on yoh)
-god job on this chapter(and the plot) i'm waiting whit suspense for the next chapter

Sorry for my lame lack of reviews, I've been mega busy! This is really looking great, I can really imagine this all happening! And I loved Hao's reaction to Yoh's outburts in the "dream", he's such a great character! I honestly don't know who poisoned Yoh, but I'm kind of guessing maybe the Hana Gumi, but that's because I have a mega soft spot for them and I'd love to see them appear! Keep up the great work!

Anna xx

hm not hao oh well...i hope well find out who was soon

oh i know who poisoned yoh its its hao! i'm right am i?

WOW!!
I cant believe u actually did one for Shaman King!

Yay oasis! *ur new nickname* >.<

Orangey~

Aah this is so cool!! I think the reason you haven't got very many reviews is that you're using the English sub version of the names, rather than the original Japanese names. Most people will take one look at "Morty" and flee a mile ;) I can drop you a mail, if you like, with everyone's names in the original? But otherwise, I really like this story, and I hope that you continue it :)

Anna xx