That was too perfect for words. I actually cried, a bit embarressing really. I most enjoyed the idea of 'home'at the end. It was heartbreaking, but also heartwarming.

Awesome!
For all the characters mentioned (especially the Potters and Malfoys and I would quote (your) Harry here"...somehow,this image (or story) makes the most sense...". The characters' behavior, their words are very realistic, or should I say, believable or convincing or true... (hmmm, ran out of adjectives but I hope you get the point).

This was amazingly freaking awesome!

using a parent's first name as the child's middle name seems to be a pattern in harry potter

ex: harry james, ginerva molly, hermione jane, ronald arthur, sirius orion, draco lucius, lucius abraxis, etc.

I want more of this. :D

The idea of the family they could be sends me into cute overdrive. :D

This piece feels so natural and so homely. The last bit where tter cried made me cry too.

I've been reading fanfiction for almost 8 years now, and I've only left a review for maybe five different stories, yours included. It was short, simple, with barely a plot, but my god you made me feel a truly sweet experience. It was real. Maybe you just got me at a weak moment, maybe you really are that amazing with words, but if more people created such emotions with words like you did here, I would be terribly content.
Weave your words

that story was absolutly amazing it brought tears to my eyes

wow loved it great job

That was sooo... sweet *Fangirly giggles
I don't think I'll -ever- get bored of watching the same characters fall in love over and over :D

Merlin damn these kinda sad endings though They deserve a happily ever after, Bob damn it! :3

Tsk tsk tsk..

But that hug in the end.. Nawwwwww.

At least they have some family now :P

And Lily should go and... hang by Filch's chains for a few years or so. We don't need her at!

Awww! I love this!

OMG i love this story sooooooooooo much like seriously its so cute and it makes me happy i really think you should add on more chapters and make it a multi-chapter story...pleasee!

This is so incredible! I actually cried!- WHy couldn't they work it out? *Sobs* You are an awesome writer- do more!

i really love this story

I loved it. It made me cry.

Comments? Do I have comments? Holy crap that was good! There is so many other things too. This piece is well written, flows smoothly, everyone ends up happy, the life is forever, did I mention your writing flows? Because it does. This is so inspiring, perfect, and simply wonderful, all at the same time? How the hell did you come up with this? I am so jealous right now, you wouldn't believe it, ever! I wish I had your creative sector in my head. Could you copy it? This is so awesome. Jealous and I wish it were mine. But I won't copy it, that is plagiarism. Wow. Just, wow.